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Don't give up
By Gemboo on 10/07/2014
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dont give up 


Written by pen's  (10/7/2014 7:31:02 AM)

really nice poem

 


Written by mreli  (1/30/2017 4:10:24 PM)


 


Written by DiMack  (4/19/2017 3:15:54 AM)

Delightful sentiments but you use many stock phrases that weaken your position enormously.

I find it difficult to emote about an abstract poem of this length, mainly because you've given no tangible imagery for the reader to latch on to. Essentially, the same thing could have been said in one quatrain.

The meter is inconsistent in places, varying from iambic tetrameter through to pentameter, hexameter and even heptameter.

I'd say this was a good start.

Hope some of this helps.


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