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How to approach an attractive sentence
By JdSchooley on 06/05/2009
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Written by kewlstar  (6/5/2009 6:43:04 PM)

This is awesome stuff haha, good one.

How to approach an attractive sentence 

Written by DesertBoyIan  (6/5/2009 11:15:20 PM)

This is just great ! Funny and creative - it made me laugh ! Thank you ! :-)


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Written by Brian Mackay  (6/6/2009 4:45:27 AM)

Great stuff, Jd

I smiled all the way through. I have a similar piece about poetic devices. I'll see if I can find it.

Thoroughly enjoyed,



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Written by Unknown Member  (6/6/2009 6:18:27 AM)

You've done the impossible: merged an entire English 101 course into one poem! Very clever and humorous. You might consider taking the accent out of the word "cliche," even though technically it is proper. It comes over (at least on my PC) as a combo of several characters, including a copyright sign. Sometimes it's allowable to omit accents from foreign-based words for that very reason. Cheers.


Written by jdupy  (6/6/2009 10:55:18 AM)

Terrific! Imaginative, creative and absolutely clever! I love it!


Written by rachelle1165  (6/6/2009 12:00:45 PM)

and well written :=)


Written by Jennifer.Wold  (6/6/2009 3:18:39 PM)

Ok so you were right. It did make me giggle. It is super clever and I got a very, very funny mental movie out of it. It was like Cheers crossed with South Park crossed with Quagmire from Family guy. God do I have a weird brain....


Written by supriyamothay  (6/7/2009 1:02:46 PM)

My God, Jd! How much of grammar did you revise when you wrote this piece? This is amazing stuff and a smile hasnt left my face as yet... You've rocked it!

:) great stuff 

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Written by Nai  (6/8/2009 11:05:01 AM)

yea yea yea funnny guy... with E101 meets invasive poetry lol


Written by iverhyck  (6/9/2009 8:42:52 AM)

I think you overdid here

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