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A diary challenge.
By alienrhymer on 01/27/2012
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a diary challenge 

Written by quill59  (1/28/2012 1:00:04 AM)

very curious poem like it


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Written by alienrhymer  (1/29/2012 7:51:57 AM)

thanks, nice to hear it.


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Written by mwhousemouse  (1/29/2012 1:09:22 PM)

I love the allegory you create. Your chest of treasures a diary contains in knowledge held an echo of which remains in you. Unable to call "dear" yet human quality allude. A pleasure to read words of yours I have dearly missed.
Thank You Michael


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Written by alienrhymer  (1/30/2012 1:30:35 AM)

Thanks a lot for reading. I'm not sure I understand everything, however. 'a chest...contains in knowledge held' - means contains what? or whom? and knowledge held by whom? is it an allude (allusion? or both?) I'm at a loss - I'm really dubious, perhaps, unduly so, about the boundaries of syntax and knowledge held.


Written by montyfuss  (1/30/2012 10:13:37 AM)

I like that this is not an entry more a deion. Very very well done.

A Diary Challenge 

Written by DesertBoyIan  (1/30/2012 5:42:14 PM)

Very good wording, like the flow and especially the idea - Peace - Ian


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Written by alienrhymer  (1/30/2012 10:57:23 PM)

Thanks for reading, espessially for your kind words, Ian. I'm going to look up 'deion' now.


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Written by mwhousemouse  (1/31/2012 5:57:41 AM)

Anna the word Ian wrote is - de-s.c.r.i.p.t-ion.
You can not write that word
My review brought my thoughts & experience stirring my view which may be different from your intentions but does not take away from the quality of your creation.
Thanks again Michael


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Written by alienrhymer  (2/2/2012 5:34:06 AM)

Whose do you refer to? Or is it a in general, unspecified? In this case I'm not sure I know of any universals that hold for s in general, although, of course, there can be some. Do you?


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Written by montyfuss  (2/2/2012 8:56:11 AM)

It does not have an exact definition it is simply a synonym for thousands of other words deriving from words such as superb and exquisite.

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