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Edited version -And So It's Come to This-Challenge 1(actual journal entry)
By DesertBoyIan on 01/30/2012
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Written by montyfuss  (1/30/2012 10:12:31 AM)

Although I enjoyed reading this I must disagree. Lust never leads to love.


Written by 1N2  (1/31/2012 1:05:52 AM)

lust to love 

Written by flanders  (1/31/2012 5:24:11 AM)

I think lust can become love for where does love
begin,you lust someone then hopeing to meet
them,and the rest is history,
lovely piece of writing thanks,,flanders.,.


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Written by montyfuss  (1/31/2012 8:09:33 AM)

Love comes out of friendship the basis of any worthing relationship lies in what sex? No. Marriage isn't just sex it's conversation and laughter. If you disagree with me I feel so bad for you my friend.

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Written by Ignorance/is/bliss  (2/1/2012 5:43:02 PM)

This intrigued me. I say that lust cannot solidify into love.It is replaced by... A simple emotion of want extinguished by the uneven, flowing force of our hearts. Love... Can be found through lust, in my simple opinion. I enjoyed it. Your poetry helps me, thank you again.


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Written by ANU  (2/2/2012 10:13:25 PM)

Quite rhythmic and interesting piece


Written by skymist2  (2/15/2012 6:46:46 PM)

This is well written and I enjoyed reading this. Seems like a confession that ended a relationship. You have a way with deions that add a depth to the piece. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Thanks for sharing.


And So it's Come to This 

Written by ScottyHarris  (2/15/2012 6:55:17 PM)

Powerful piece of writing, the sadness seems unbearable. I like the way you've used repition, it's not overdone, you're quite a talented poet

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