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Response to the second challenge.
By alienrhymer on 02/11/2012
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Response to the second challenge 

Written by Unknown Member  (3/14/2012 9:07:57 AM)

nice poem :)


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Written by alienrhymer  (3/15/2012 2:46:40 AM)


Response to second challenge 

Written by DesertBoyIan  (3/16/2012 5:43:08 PM)

I like how this is broken into three eparate parts that all come together in the end, and love how you auestion it in the last line. Fits very well together - Peace - Ian


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Written by alienrhymer  (3/16/2012 8:05:27 PM)

thanks for reading and reviewing.


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Written by mwhousemouse  (3/17/2012 10:29:03 AM)

This is super fun Anna!
The residue of wax that leaves a spot where watercolors run around - could it be Ground? ( as in land, earth or maybe rock) though I think they are all porous to some degree. Your water color flow has spread my thoughts.
Great job. I enjoyed this immensely.
Thanks Michael


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Written by alienrhymer  (3/17/2012 11:43:31 PM)

Thanks for reading! Of course, if I see what you mean, the notions of 'figure' and 'ground' are applicable here. But especially funny are those of 'backgrounding' and 'foregrounding': the wax spot defines the spread of watercolour, but on the other hand, it is, intuitively, foregrounded rather than backgrounded. It could, probably, be worked into a great human (relations) story, but somehow gets tedious. Maybe it's not the right approach.

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