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Queen of the Seas ( Solitary Fate) Challenge 4 - Picture II
By RavenEyes on 03/19/2012
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nice 


Written by Unknown Member  (3/20/2012 11:43:24 AM)

nice poem :)

hmmmm 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (3/30/2012 8:22:58 AM)

Now this is poetical embellishment! I love the use of imagery, metaphoric choices, lexical clarity and almost romantic voice unfolding. Technique is great.

It evokes the reader, specially this line: Though I long to heed her call, go to her, save her, love her, Though I truly hate the damsel in distress routine.-the girl that requires saving (from her solitary fate!).

I love the element of surprise at the end very much. What a punch line! -I am unable to swim!

Lexical simplicity with outmost power! Good job!


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