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ch 6 games room, the prison ship.
By flanders on 04/18/2012
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Written by Cervantes  (4/19/2012 12:44:47 PM)

I think a little punctuation would help this piece. The story is so strong and heart wrenching that the clarity of certain lines would greatly add to its power. Just fixing the few minor spelling errors and the punctuation would make this piece a gem.

prison ship 

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Written by flanders  (4/20/2012 3:16:55 AM)

thanks c ive sorted that,flanders.

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