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How Much Is Enough? This Is Enough (Poetry Chllenge)
By Ianthepoet on 01/20/2015
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Written by deadmanseeking  (1/21/2015 2:27:05 AM)

Painfully intense. thanks

 


Written by standrkm  (1/21/2015 4:25:03 AM)

I can empathize, flows well too

 

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Written by mwhousemouse  (1/22/2015 7:18:05 AM)

I always wonder what so desperately is in need of atonement & so tightly wrapped in futility. this theme is present in a large portion of your art. such desperation many times with NO chance for success. Sometimes in spite of belief inspired faith expressed in devotion it is often met without out any possibility of redemption.
in this piece I continue to weigh, after many readings, who is overwhelmed with the overpowering sense of cynicism: "Pointlessly,sarcastic laugh, casual toss, snickering, sickening". I ponder, is it the author or the reader?
Well written, however, simply by the fact I am questioning in an effort to bring your message to my experience even if I am unable to do so successfully.


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