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How Much ( challenge )
By deadmanseeking on 01/21/2015
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how much challenge 


Written by pen's  (1/21/2015 4:36:22 AM)

you put the question out there how much
how much truth is i don't think anyone really
knows how much like the answer

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Written by deadmanseeking  (1/21/2015 4:59:50 AM)

Well rendered review. thanks

How Much 


Written by Ianthepoet  (1/21/2015 5:39:38 AM)

Perhaps "how much" is infinity? Maybe none of us know the answer...wonderful ink!!! Peace - Ian

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Written by deadmanseeking  (1/21/2015 10:16:30 AM)

Again, deep thanks

 

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Written by mwhousemouse  (1/22/2015 6:57:12 AM)

Question stirs a question in more than one stimulation in a moment seized. very nice

Stanza 3, line 3 for me seemed a bit out o sync from the developed flow

I don't presume to write for you but only trigger your thoughts by this : "your hold of the control" offered only as a possibility.
In my thinking it would match "the you" established in line 3 of stanza 1 & 2.
What are your thoughts?

If left alone it is still an enjoyable read.

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Written by deadmanseeking  (1/24/2015 9:56:12 AM)

thank you, sir. am revising as per your suggestion. I think I may have been looking for something more like that when I wrote it.


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