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How Much (challenge rewrite)
By deadmanseeking on 01/24/2015
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Written by mwhousemouse  (1/24/2015 12:24:27 PM)

I see you made the change & now that I see it in place I am not sure.
What do you think?

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Written by deadmanseeking  (1/24/2015 2:43:35 PM)

It added clarity to what i was thinking, a more direct challenge to the principle and the action being in their court to freeing themselves from their chains. Again, thanks. I agree with your original thought because it didn`t quit fit. This seems to fit better.

how much challenge rewrite 


Written by pen's  (1/25/2015 4:34:25 AM)

excellent poem great poetry i like the rewrite
much more


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