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Lighthouse challenge
By KenAtkins on 08/03/2015
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Written by KenAtkins  (8/3/2015 2:49:26 PM)

I'm not happy with this poem, but would appreciate all feedback

lighthouse challenge 


Written by pen's  (8/3/2015 4:07:45 PM)


Lighthouse... 


Written by deadmanseeking  (8/11/2015 7:33:04 AM)

First, thanks for your kind review of My Friend`s etc. Glad you got so much out of it. As for your poem, perhaps you want to find a life preserver in another verse. Perhaps you don`t want to be on the bottom of the ocean because you know you can tread water for days, if not weeks, because of the love she and you shared. Maybe you`re listening to your addictions too much. Maybe I don`t know what I`m talking about. thx. Keep writing.


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