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Rider ( sonnet challenge )
By deadmanseeking on 03/29/2016
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Written by JdSchooley  (5/17/2016 5:48:10 PM)

You have a good beginning, I believe it needs a little polishing yet. A too many beats in line 4, 7, 9, and a beat short in the last line........Jd


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Written by deadmanseeking  (5/17/2016 10:07:06 PM)

You are right. It took a bit to get it that close. Too much rock and not enough Shakespeare. I like insightful reviews. thx Ps Check out his Obbligato.

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