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MY MIND (quatern challenge)
By seaverarnold@yahoo.com on 11/23/2010
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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (11/23/2010 8:29:59 PM)

And you almost got it right. The anaphoric line (the repetitive line is misplaced on the second and third paragraph.

The repetitive line on the second paragraph goes on the second line.

The repetitive line on the third paragraph goes on the third line.

The repetitive line on the last paragraph goes on the last line.

But this is the fun about this challenges. I know you had fun here.

ps. Thanks for playing!

 

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Written by alienrhymer  (11/23/2010 11:17:17 PM)

There is something sad about this poem, although I'm not sure what. Maybe I find the idea of a moving refrain too serious.

just a matter of structural rules 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (11/24/2010 7:55:49 AM)

for this genre.

Thanks Linda for taking the time. I like what you done here.

I like how you made your mind and its works the topic of this.

Thanks you both ladies...


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