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OCEAN (quatern)
By seaverarnold@yahoo.com on 11/24/2010
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Reviews: 3

I like it 

Written by montyfuss  (11/25/2010 1:26:44 PM)

I do believe I like it a bit less than the last. However it is still good. I think it may be just a bit cliche. You seem to be simply stating things that can be done at the beach. Although I maybe missing something

this was time travel for me Linda 

Written by Red Roses and Wine  (11/26/2010 4:35:42 PM)

It took me back to my childhoo. I used to love going to the beach with my family and enjoy all the activities mentioned above. There is suchan innocent air to this piece that comforted me.

Perhaps because all was sweet and innocent back then!

Sorry I didn't find this before!


Written by lilyluna22  (12/3/2010 9:37:21 AM)

I dont know, this seemed kind of simple to me, more like you were just talking about what you can do at the ocean, not a poem about it. More Imagery maybe?

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