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Love, War, or BOTH? (Ch. #5 Aubade)
By JAM on 02/07/2011
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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/7/2011 12:23:31 PM)

I enjoy this one very much. Its simplicity was sweet, serene yet in the myths of departure. I am happy to see you playing in this forum. Keep them coming. We’ll soon have another challenge.

Iris Yanette
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Written by mwhousemouse  (2/8/2011 11:20:31 AM)

I find this strong in message of parting in commitment together you remain "as our love gets stronger"
When I read this piece aloud (which I almost always do) I think some editing could strengthen the flowof the poetry.
Read & see what you think. You may not, at all, agree with me.
Thanks Michael

Love... 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/13/2011 3:34:31 PM)

Wonderful write! Peace - Ian


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