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By flanders on 02/07/2011
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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/8/2011 12:34:52 PM)

The voice of melancholy and lost here give this confessional as special touch of sadness. The imagery here is great especially the originality of the melted ice cream in analogy of what goes from one state to the next. The closure was most unexpected as(((his))) bed awaits you. Talk about implied or extrapolated confessions. Or am I getting this all wrong? Or just reading madly between the lines? Lol Either way, good poetry.

gone 

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Written by flanders  (2/8/2011 1:13:34 PM)

you read well iris.

I know I'll see you there! 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/9/2011 8:22:48 AM)

Please feel free to visit our Midnight Confessional Forum which inspired this challenge at the link below. (just copy and past on your address bar)

http://www.moontowncafe.com/poetry/sub_cat.asp?cat_id=3&subcat_id=64

The Midnight Confessional is a great place for you to let your hair down and tell us some of your little secrets.

You can rant, you can do it in a poem, and you can write lyrics… Either way, this is where you lay the cards on the table and open the closet door so your little skeletons can come out and play.

On that note, I hope to see you drop by this forum and make it one of your favorites!


Iris Yanette
Official Game Room Moderator

 

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Written by mwhousemouse  (2/9/2011 9:41:25 AM)

Quite the heavy closet door has opened here
fine work Flanders
Michael

Gone 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/13/2011 3:32:22 PM)

Beautiful yet so very sad - Peace - Ian


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