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When Love Begins (#5 Aubade Challenge)
By kewlstar on 02/09/2011
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when love begins 

Written by lindaseaver  (2/9/2011 5:55:24 AM)

lovely poem nicely written and i especially
like the three last lines about talking nice
this poem gives the reader lots to think about


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Written by Unknown Member  (2/9/2011 7:03:29 AM)

This is a lovely poem bapz, I especially like the imagery in the third stanza.

to the above comment, I don't think the last three lines you noticed are apart of the poem, it's his signature. :)

:) Kool Aid Smile 

Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/9/2011 8:15:04 AM)

I think you’re a natural poet. -So young and with such depth of inspiration.

I must say your imagery was simply superb, technique was right on the money.
This poem was one of my two favorites on this challenge.

Thanks for posting!

Iris Yanette
Official Game Room Moderator

Happy Hump Day! 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/9/2011 8:20:35 AM)

Please feel free to visit our Midnight Confessional Forum which inspired this challenge at the link below. (just copy and past on your address bar)


The Midnight Confessional is a great place for you to let your hair down and tell us some of your little secrets.

You can rant, you can do it in a poem, and you can write lyrics… Either way, this is where you lay the cards on the table and open the closet door so your little skeletons can come out and play.

On that note, I hope to see you drop by this forum and make it one of your favorites!

Iris Yanette
Official Game Room Moderator


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Written by kewlstar  (2/9/2011 8:37:47 AM)

Thank you Iris, Linda, and Val for you lovely support and admiration of my poems. Your comments and thoughts mean a lot.

When Love Begins 

Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/13/2011 11:40:33 AM)

Absolutely beautiful and so smooth! I really love it! You are very talented!
Peace - Ian

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