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turn the clock back - Game Room Challenge #6
By flanders on 02/10/2011
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Written by mwhousemouse  (2/10/2011 5:34:07 AM)

consoling the cheated one a cheater becomes.
alas such is the way when a lass & a lad in consolation conclusion consummate.
It was a great pleasure to read this piece.
Thanks Michael

Two can play the same game? indeed 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/10/2011 9:02:09 AM)

Those are the types of confession that can have some killed. lol

killed 

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Written by flanders  (2/10/2011 10:38:25 AM)

thay are roses id better stop telling lol

Nice... 


Written by JAM  (2/10/2011 1:55:45 PM)

NOT THAT I RECOMMEND CHEATING, BUT

Ya put it well! :)
(P.S. Word of advice
While it adds to the poem nicely
The 'run-on effect' is a double-edde sword
But you did avoid its other edge VERY NICELY
Most people would end up getting a 3 when they try to do the 'run-on effect' (like I interpret you're doing as I read) BUT YOU, Got a 4
Nice...;)

 

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Written by alienrhymer  (2/11/2011 12:12:39 AM)

A very nice picture, going well with the text.

Turn the Clock Back 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/12/2011 1:12:48 PM)

an eye for an eye! Good write, the way you have written the lines rounding around confused me a bit though - :-) Peace - Ian


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