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Steam Rises (Challenge # 7)
By DesertBoyIan on 02/18/2011
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This is Nicely Written 


Written by JAM  (2/18/2011 9:00:16 PM)

Passion Put In Words!
P.S. (They Never Said They Took Their Clothes Off ;) )
You wrote this well
The reader can literally get excited the cool down with them.
GOT A GREAT 'Involving' Feel To It
NICE! Tip O'D Hat 2-Ya! ;)

I enjoyed your read 


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/19/2011 12:39:41 PM)

and for struggling you did so well. The cossumation feels a bit rushed (like two minute action) lol But a most erotic read.


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