This is Nicely Written
Written by JAM (2/18/2011 9:00:16 PM)
||Passion Put In Words!
P.S. (They Never Said They Took Their Clothes Off ;) )
You wrote this well
The reader can literally get excited the cool down with them.
GOT A GREAT 'Involving' Feel To It
NICE! Tip O'D Hat 2-Ya! ;)
I enjoyed your read
Written by Red Roses and Wine (2/19/2011 12:39:41 PM)
||and for struggling you did so well. The cossumation feels a bit rushed (like two minute action) lol But a most erotic read.