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Release Me challenge 7
By DesertBoyIan on 02/18/2011
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Written by Raisy95  (2/18/2011 2:25:05 PM)


this one is most beautiful 


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/19/2011 12:44:48 PM)

but not erotic to me... I think you have an excellent love poem here rather that an erotica.

different kind 

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Written by JinglesMcFeelgood  (2/19/2011 6:59:27 PM)

The thing I like abotu this poem is the different voice it uses to talk about sexuality. when this challenge started I was definitely not keen on it. But I like how it's forced a more varied playing field on the subject.

I like the desperation here. I like that the act of love is a saving grace, not a vice. The only line I don't love is 'so come let's be as one' because I've seen it so many times. But it doesn't detract from the whole. Well done.

 


Written by raven-wings  (3/7/2011 12:40:24 PM)

I had this strange thought while reading let their body and soul be your key no idea where that came from or why.It is not often you find a kindred soul who makes you so complete that they are the way out of any situation whatever the struggle you remain strong.When you're away from them invisible strings hold you together.This is my second read of one of your pens and again it has this subtle sensuality about it but a nice tender almost delicious feeling like a rosey red apple you can't wait to bite into.

 


Written by Ghostwriter  (3/9/2011 11:43:37 AM)

Great work! :)


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