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Our De'nouement (challenge #7)
By JdSchooley on 02/26/2011
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Very Nice poem 


Written by kewlstar  (2/27/2011 4:57:57 AM)

I love the combination of nature and erotica. There are few words if avoided makes a poem that much better since they are very cliche and used often by every other poet, "soul", "despair" --> and you have used it twice in this poem. "then we shall purge our despair", "empty my despair with your timid song" very similar lines, was the repetition intentional? I love your last line, powerful and creative. Drown my "acing" thoughts, I don't know if "acing" is the correct word here.

Overall this is a very strong poem, and perhaps better than the most provided in this challenge. Thank you and keep writing :)

kewlstar 

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Written by JdSchooley  (2/27/2011 2:33:33 PM)

You have some verey good points and I had planned to polish a bit shortly. I shall remove the offending language in doing so, thanks....Jd

ourDe nouement challenge 7 


Written by lindaseaver  (3/11/2011 3:24:38 AM)

excellent poem

lindaseaver 

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Written by JdSchooley  (3/11/2011 5:30:23 PM)

Well, thanks! So glad you enjoyed this.....Jd

Challenge 7 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/12/2011 9:01:12 AM)

BRAVO!!!! This is a BEAUTIFUL and PASSSIONATE piece!!!! I love your imagery! Such a tender piece - love it!!! Peace - Ian

Ian 

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Written by JdSchooley  (5/12/2011 10:16:36 AM)

What fine praise, I am humbled............Jd


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