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Challenge 8 - Lost In The Night
By Marcos on 03/03/2011
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Written by montyfuss  (3/3/2011 10:28:34 PM)

Good poem very interesting how you toyed with this challenge. I like it quite a bit.

 


Written by skitzo_scribbler  (3/4/2011 12:40:34 AM)

Powerfully presented.. Keep penning.

lost in the night 

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Written by flanders  (3/4/2011 3:22:36 AM)

good 1 and good luck i like this,flanders.

Lost in the Night 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (3/6/2011 1:19:04 PM)

I love the meaning inside this piece, it is so true, and you capture it with vivid imagery. It reminds me of the Vietnam vets, now homeless, who hang out in the green in the center of the town I live in - very moving!
Peace - Ian

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Written by kewlstar  (3/7/2011 8:37:09 AM)

To be honest, you have one of the best translation of the image of challenge 8 in this competition. This is interesting bad very diverse from the rest of the poems. All you require is to re-read this a few times and polish up the poem. "watching your best friend dies" grammar. "your fists are now your pride" good line. Check your tenses through out the poem, you are sometimes mixing up past and present. Thank you and keep writing :).

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (3/14/2011 12:30:49 PM)



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