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Telling you[challenge 9,inspired by W.H. Auden]
By flanders on 03/27/2011
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Written by mwhousemouse  (3/27/2011 6:32:19 PM)

vk, did you use 'The More Loving One" for this piece? I like your write but am not sure what you used.
Oh, his name is Auden.
Always like your work regardless

telling you 

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Written by flanders  (3/28/2011 3:16:25 AM)

just one of his poems and done it my way

which one of his poems inspired you? 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (3/28/2011 8:55:48 AM)

Could it been "If I could tell you?"

thats the one roses 

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Written by flanders  (3/28/2011 9:01:45 AM)

ive not read his poetry before,at least i dont think
so,good stuff,thanks for the challenge.


Written by JAM  (3/28/2011 1:16:33 PM)

Everything's a 5, cept for the flow & the structure
The Structure needs work, BUT ONLY CAUSE
The Flow Sacrifices some to gain an UNHEARD EIGHT IN FLOW!!! WOW!
I feel It's the BEST in flow I've Read, but considering who wrote it, I'm NOT Surprises;)

hey Jam 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (3/28/2011 1:54:49 PM)

I hope to see you playing on challenge 9! :)


Written by Unknown Member  (4/5/2011 12:33:40 AM)

There are some really beautiful images here. I love the "time will say I told you so". It was such a strong phrase, and really resonated with me.

I would have given it a four because of the structure problems, but the content more than made up for it. I love this piece. Your writing is always a pleasure to read.

Telling You 

Written by DesertBoyIan  (4/5/2011 10:17:21 AM)

I can relate! This is a beautiful piece of work, I personally do not see anything wrong with the structure, it flows freely to me - as usual, a great poem - you are such a talented writer! Have you ever considered writing a book??? Peace - Ian

desert boy 

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Written by flanders  (4/5/2011 3:55:53 PM)

thankyou ian not yet but that would be nice
peace to you,flanders.,.


Written by Mikey1174  (4/6/2011 8:44:53 PM)

My thoughts run with the wind cause I like. Good work

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