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Pie Eyed (Smitten) [#10]
By mwhousemouse on 04/05/2011
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Pie Eyed... 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (4/5/2011 10:09:00 AM)

loved it...BRAVO my man! Great last lines! Peace - Ian

enjoyable read 


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (4/5/2011 11:28:06 AM)

I am enjoying this challenge. But I don't see the use of alliteration here.

 

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Written by raven-wings  (4/5/2011 1:55:10 PM)

Aww nothing like childrens eyes to touch you in a lot of ways, and you must have a touch of that inside you still. I feel we never truly grow up, all Peter Pan like in our ways lol.I adored the word usage, nice short to the point, great stuff just my kind of read.

 

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Written by mwhousemouse  (4/6/2011 12:25:54 AM)

Thanks Ian, Iris & raven-wings.

Iris I am taking another look at all the pieces offered to understand the alliteration part. I agree i did not have a phrase that alliterates the title cliche. I did intend "searching giant orbs" to replace the cliche & "my eyes" to reemphasize but I did not read carefully before writing.
I will just have to make another attempt. Thanks for the heads up.
Michael

 


Written by Mikey1174  (4/6/2011 9:56:54 PM)

We all grow up so fast. Love the nostalgia


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