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Waste of Love (ch11)
By Ghostwriter on 04/13/2011
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Written by screamjasmiiine  (4/15/2011 9:05:43 AM)


Hmmm? 


Written by Mikey1174  (4/15/2011 10:09:24 AM)

Writing style aside, this poem has me thinking of my youth and my father. Thanks for the emotions!

 

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Written by ANU  (4/16/2011 2:33:43 AM)

Emotion arising piece of work :)

 

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Written by mwhousemouse  (4/16/2011 3:39:41 PM)

The children follow & march to beat of war. Unknown causes fuel forefathers pursuit. Youth in sacrifice the greed of man. Mothers alone must live.
All expressed well in your verse. The comforting words of the mother in contrast loss of life in battle yield. Al strengthened in the refrain: A kiss on the head & laid to bed & fin peace my son & rest your weary head.
Good job Matt
Michael

Waste of Love 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/31/2011 12:43:24 PM)

I realy love your style - the repitition works great! Good write! Peace-Ian


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