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Out of Control–Challenge 15–A True Story-for D.C.
By DesertBoyIan on 05/11/2011
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Written by JinglesMcFeelgood  (5/11/2011 12:45:46 PM)

First, I like the title, I like that you've chosen to examine the control-out of control pardigm that affects many of those suffering from eating disorders.

just my opinion, but I think you could break up the narrative just a little and it might help display the story better.

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