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Challenge *Mental Health Awareness*
By Scout on 05/11/2011
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Challenge 15 

Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/12/2011 7:44:42 AM)

Wow, great piece, sounds very much like schizphrenia! Peace - Ian

good to see you in our game room 

Written by Red Roses and Wine  (5/12/2011 2:44:34 PM)

It sure does sound like schizophrenia indeed. I like the normalcy of your tone and the fact that you take the voice of a schizophrenic (if that indeed is the dx). I think this was a very objective write yet evoked the subjectivity of the matter.


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Written by Scout  (5/17/2011 1:22:53 AM)

you both kindly, appreciate your thoughts on this.

Red, nice to take part, when I saw your topic for this challenge, this piece just bubbled out of me for it


Greetings :) 

Written by SilverFlame  (7/19/2011 10:30:41 AM)

So good to see your writing again Scout. As always a great piece, particularly in context of the challenge. I feel that the syncopated line breaks work particularly well to convey the mental state of the speaker.


Written by pielover25  (11/27/2011 2:31:32 PM)

good poem.


Written by blogetry  (6/19/2013 11:56:30 AM)

Write poet....love your witty/narrative/whimsical style !

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