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JAM's Coals & Diamonds
By JAM on 05/27/2011
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JAM'S Coal and Diamond 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/29/2011 9:23:44 AM)

Really like this alot, great transition from coal to diamond and I loved the topic, it's not the same old thing, ya know? good job! Peace - Ian

 

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Written by mwhousemouse  (6/5/2011 2:42:50 PM)

I like this exercise - it appears the first is thoughts written spontaneously & rearranged in the second.
The second still seems a bit contrived to rhyme but much improved & a good read.
Thanks Michael


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