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Strings
By supriyamothay on 05/29/2011
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Strings 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (5/29/2011 9:14:45 AM)

Even your coal poem is great, but your Dismond poem is out of this world GREAT! Good job with the Challenge!!!! Peace - Ian

 


Written by mwhousemouse  (6/5/2011 2:47:03 PM)


Bravo for changing your thoughts to poetry
coal to diamond
Michael

 

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Written by alienrhymer  (6/6/2011 7:28:46 AM)

Your diamond looks hard pressed.

 

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Written by alienrhymer  (6/14/2011 10:09:50 PM)

What I meant is that we usually think of diamond texts as less sketchy than coal ones, but here it is the other way round. I like the image of 'canned' in your first poem.

good one! 


Written by quleen  (5/24/2012 2:47:36 AM)

What am I then?
But a doll
With strings
In another's hands
...

very piquant a peom...keep them coming...


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