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Challenge 19: After Life ...
By ANU on 06/12/2011
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Written by mwhousemouse  (6/12/2011 2:09:32 PM)

I especially enjoyed the out of body experience as confused reality. the lack of awareness as to the finality of your situation. sensationally as though living still although beyond your body gone.
Poetically I think some editing could give this wonderful thought more impact. As it is now it is a rambling narrative. Some attention to poetic elements could bring it to a state of beauty.
Thanks Michael

 


Written by Raisy95  (6/14/2011 5:54:29 PM)

i really enjoyed reading this, and i like your use of words and the story in this. great job, i liked it!


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