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granda vic challenge23)
By flanders on 09/29/2011
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Written by BeautifullyCorrupt  (10/13/2011 2:18:25 PM)

I enjoyed the imagery used and the way each line flowed into the next.
*he was like a newspaper with stories to tell*
By far my favorite line.. I like the metaphor.
~Dominique

 


Written by JdSchooley  (10/16/2011 1:59:47 PM)

Just saw one typo, as ''of'' for "off".
A very quaint work, and great images too.
I wonder if this isn't just a good start on a great piece, I feel there may be more to tell.
You have already picked a nice pace in the piece.....Jd


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