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NOBODY CARES ABOUT A NOBODY
By CainofmyTime on 10/03/2011
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Nice emotion 


Written by OliviaStrange  (10/3/2011 9:01:54 PM)

I love the emotion in this poem.
Its deep, short, and to the point ^_^

 


Written by labeled  (10/3/2011 9:03:12 PM)

Wow. I love it. I love the way you start out rhyming, but use the inconsistency later to make a point about how people feel when they get like this. It really was amazing. My breath is taken away.

 


Written by CityBratz  (10/8/2011 8:34:36 PM)

You have begun using "NOBODY' over and over, which seem to work, then you switch to 'ME'.
this might work if you used the change in a more defiant way, instead of all self pity.
getting out of the why-me's? takes some doing and writing might just help that.

nobody 


Written by flanders  (10/12/2011 1:02:58 PM)

not a bad title?

yep 


Written by standrkm  (10/18/2011 6:29:01 AM)

pretty good, but you can and will get better :)

 


Written by Z3RO  (10/24/2011 5:48:36 PM)

i like the feeling that goes into this poem

 


Written by lastlaugh  (10/24/2011 5:51:23 PM)

great idea. nice play on words. i actually really like how you switched to "me" from "nobody". it makes it more personal, as well as includes everyone who has ever felt this way.

 


Written by mastermehan  (10/24/2011 5:52:57 PM)

good read

 

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Written by CityBratz  (10/27/2011 8:40:07 PM)

I wonder who all the sudden five star reviewers are? It's not nice to vote for yourself!


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