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Sceptic
By tayjames on 11/03/2011
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sceptic 


Written by nolleyc0116  (11/29/2011 6:06:55 PM)

I really liked your poem

 


Written by traceofashadow  (12/3/2011 2:09:17 PM)

I think that you have some good ideas going on in this poem, but my problem with it is that it is very choppy-- and not in the good, poetic way. This feels like you are trying to throw out your ideas to the reader, but your not doing it in a logical order. There is no method to your madness. I believe, though, with the right amount of work, this poem could be cleaned up and made into a beautiful masterpeice. Let the poem flow, let it be organic. Thank you for the great read, though. I can't wait to read more from you!

 


Written by Unknown Member  (12/4/2011 3:15:54 PM)

Good Poem. Really Enjoyed Reading It.


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