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this is my life
By flanders on 11/12/2011
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this is my life 


Written by nolleyc0116  (11/29/2011 5:10:57 PM)

The poem was very creative and beautiful

 


Written by traceofashadow  (12/3/2011 2:14:49 PM)

Now I'm a big fan of strange puctuation-- but only when it makes sense. The quotations marks, ect, that you use in your poem, unfortunately, fall under the second chategory. Puctuation is normally used to emphasize something, but I don't understand why you would want to emphasize the things that you used it on. Maybe its an artistic choice, and that's okay. You poem is just a few steps away from being great. And I really appreciate how short it was. You didn't waste precious words, you got right to the heart of the matter. Thank you for your poem, I enjoyed it.

this is my life 

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Written by flanders  (12/6/2011 3:56:06 AM)

thankyou you are right i changed it,
but one cant call this a three rating,
thanks for reading my poetry. flanders.,.

 


Written by Unknown Member  (12/6/2011 1:49:55 PM)

It was very creative, very simple, I really like it, and it was perfectly written, it was also beautiful, I like how you wrote it, I'll read more and be back =] keep writing, and I will read them =]

 

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Written by traceofashadow  (12/6/2011 5:22:29 PM)

I gave you a three because I didn't think that it deserved a five, and i knew that other people would probably vote higher for it. :)

my life 

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Written by flanders  (12/7/2011 4:16:34 AM)

thanks becky very kind words,
flanders.,.


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