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i am the one who is untitled
By traceofashadow on 11/30/2011
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Reviews: 5


Written by Unknown Member  (12/6/2011 1:55:18 PM)

Wow, your poem was amazing, the name to it is perfect! I really like how you worded it, and everything, all of it went perfectly together, and i like the flow of your poem, it was great, it was probably the one of the best of here, keep up the writing, and I'll be sure to review, rate, and comment on any of your poems, because they should be amazing as this one. =]


Written by INFAMY  (12/14/2011 11:18:22 PM)

i like the repition.
good symbolism.
very poetic.

your interest has led me here 

Written by indigo  (12/15/2011 12:53:11 AM)

This reads like an Indigo poem. I like our shared afinity for extended metaphors. IMHO i would rework this using "without", as opposed to "who", but of course this is your vision. Your lack of punctuation is a distraction. I am interested in reading more of your work.


Written by scotthansen  (12/23/2011 12:44:56 AM)


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Written by traceofashadow  (1/4/2012 6:02:56 PM)

Thank you all so much for the help. An edited version of this is now going to be published! Thanks for the critism and encouragement.

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