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The man who was born to weep
By snowandrain on 12/10/2011
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the man who was born to weep 

Written by quill59  (12/10/2011 7:14:01 PM)

sad poem a little repetitive with the word cry
keep writing liked the title


Written by traceofashadow  (12/14/2011 8:55:02 PM)

I really loved your title. That was just a stroke of genius. The poem was very raw and organic-- in a good way. It was natural. You could feel the flow of emotion behind it. What could be worked on for this poem, though, is your way of putting into words the emotions that you are feeling-- or describing. Your sentances in your stanzas don't quite correlate with each other. Your poem would be much improved if you were able to organize your thoughts in a cronalogical order. Thank you for the amazing read, and I cannot wait to read more from you.

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