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SMOKING ROOM RESPIITE
By Zyskandar A. Jaimot on 04/21/2007
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Smoking Room Respite 


Written by LadyArgyle  (4/21/2007 10:23:59 PM)

I like the structure in this one a lot. One really has to think about and read into it much more than the other one I commented on. The reader has to determine whether it is the cigarette or the smoker that is being exiled, when the point is that it is both... am I correct? The only time it is clear that it is the object itself you are referring to is by the interjection between each verse pertaining to how it is being lit. I found this one very interesting and much more literary (if that makes sense). You seem to have a better grasp on both the poetic and metaphorical aspects in this one.

 

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Written by Zyskandar A. Jaimot  (4/22/2007 8:07:27 AM)

to ladyargyle - thanks for the read/comments yes i was attempting to 'blur' the smoke slightly between 'ciggs' lord how i hate that expression and those who do the smoking thanks again for your comments/insight/perceptions regards zaj

Smoking... 


Written by deadmanseeking  (6/23/2015 5:06:46 AM)

Awesome images well presented thx


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