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By FormerlyLola on 07/18/2016
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Written by deadmanseeking  (7/19/2016 2:12:35 AM)

Dramatic and emotional. I like it. thx.


Written by Unknown Member  (7/20/2016 3:27:10 AM)

the brief piece begins in the 2nd person, then strangely shifts to 3rd person. the two "now" are excess.

the theme is interesting, worthy of a re-write.


Written by jeffsg111171  (12/25/2016 10:05:20 PM)

I agree kinda short

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