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By Lola7 on 01/16/2012
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Written by Karlynn726  (1/16/2012 3:21:53 PM)

this poem doesn't have a setting- what was happening yesterday that was good- where were you, what were you doing, what did you see, smell, touch taste? And then bring the setting from today in. Bring contrast. Yesterday's good vs. today's demise


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Written by Lola7  (1/16/2012 3:59:19 PM)

Are you for real? This is not a short story. It's a poem.


Written by kennethcook  (1/18/2012 3:46:22 PM)

I LOVED this poem! By far the best love/loss poem I have read in years! The heart-breaking intensity of the narrator's emotions have been expertly expressed. You are a skilled wordsmith, with a masterful control of word-crafted visualization. Thank you for a poetic treat!


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Written by Lola7  (1/18/2012 4:58:34 PM)

Thank you, Kenneth, for elevating my sagging spirit from off the floor.
I'm very appreciative.

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