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The Picture.
By Andydon on 01/16/2012
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Written by kennethcook  (1/18/2012 10:36:44 AM)

Loved this poem. Portraits are a classic symbol for love and romance, particularly lost love. You've captured the feelings of the narrator perfectly! Well structured; wonderfully worded! Only caught 2 issues: you used "your" when it should have been "you're" (common error); and the last line is a bit redundant: no need for "always" and "forever" in the same sentence, since they mean the same thing. You might consider deleting one of the 2 words. Overall, I'm quite impressed! Keep writing!

 

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Written by Andydon  (1/18/2012 12:49:04 PM)

Thankyou for the tips and I am happy you liked it.


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