Poet & Writing Community Poet Community
About Publish FAQ's Bookstore Free Poetry Contest
MoonTownCafe Home for Poets


  Search

Advanced Search
MoonTownCafe Home My Cafe Write Poems, Stories, and more Publish your Poems, Stories and Book My Friends on this Site Log-in
  Poetry & Writing ForumsFree Poetry ContestJournal

Read Reviews



Lost Love
By stephiewoods on 01/21/2012
Viewed: 268
Reviews: 2
Rating:

Lost Love 


Written by sailboat  (1/21/2012 11:08:43 PM)

Hello Stephie, Welcom to Moontown. Yes, lost love poems are the biggest majority posted. And writing helps to ease the pain. Here, I thought line 4 was a bit of a stumble. Then I reaslized it would make the perfect opening line. Try moving line 4 to the top and making it line one. And see if you like it.

"The love I lost is the highest cost"

Lost Love 


Written by Msjewel  (1/23/2012 10:14:11 PM)

To look into the eyes of the one you love and realize the love is gone is quite painful. You have expressed this pain so well in this emotional little gem. :) Julie


Read User Reviews
Write Review
Report Poem

Add To Friend

Send To Friend
The Best Online Poem and Writing Community for all
 Members
   Username
Forgot Username?

Password
Forgot Password?
Not a member?
Sign up for free!

Premium Membership

  Newsletter

  Enter your email:
  Site Stats     Online members:0      Online guests:62      Total Users:23882      Total Poems:62966
© 2000-2016 MoonTownCafe.com. All rights reserved. LinksLink to UsPoet LinksContactPrivacy