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By Msjewel on 01/24/2012
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Written by Unknown Member  (1/24/2012 2:11:39 PM)

nice poem :)

Nice Ballad 

Written by sailboat  (1/25/2012 12:07:53 AM)

This is a lovely Ballad Julie. I've walked those beaches myself. The Octaves are well formed and truely rhythmic. The tone is perfect and the storyline clear. The quatrain conclusion was logical, but I felt it could be a little stronger. Perhaps a clever metaphor would capture the emotion of this piece.

Very nice Julie, I enjoy reading your work.



Written by quill59  (1/25/2012 4:39:36 AM)

excellent poem keep writing


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Written by Msjewel  (1/25/2012 2:33:28 PM)

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie


Written by kennethcook  (2/4/2012 2:10:59 PM)

One of the better love poems I've read. With a little polishing, it could be even better! Maybe a few more "visual" words. Good job.


Written by JOHNY  (2/6/2012 8:35:22 AM)


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