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Autumn Gold
By sailboat on 01/25/2012
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ooohh ahhhh 

Written by Seth  (1/25/2012 2:49:09 PM)

Nice work here. I'll have to check out more of your work. I'll be lurking :)


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Written by sailboat  (1/25/2012 5:40:16 PM)

Thanks Seth,

This is another early sonnet. The metaphor is good, but the argument at the turn is not an arguement as it should be. I also don't like the conclusion, it could be better.

Absolutely Beautiful! 

Written by Msjewel  (1/25/2012 7:14:22 PM)

Love it! :) Julie


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Written by sailboat  (1/25/2012 7:53:19 PM)

Thanks Julie,

Yes, it is always odd to me how women can see these love Sonnets for what they,

These are snapshots of a torrid affair between two lover poets. Many of the lines written have special meaning to her.

Like I pointed out to Seth, the argument is not as it should be, but isn't sexual persuasion an argument?

Glad you liked.


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