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With Love from Venus
By Msjewel on 01/25/2012
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Written by Unknown Member  (1/26/2012 8:04:59 AM)

nice poem :)

Nice poem 

Written by sailboat  (1/26/2012 2:02:16 PM)

Hi Julie,

I see so much similarity in the tone of your poems to some of mine ... don't know if that's good, or bad though. (chuckle)

This looks to be a shortened/ personal version of the Sonnet. And some lovely passion going on here. The last rhyme of the Octave seems a little forced to me. I think it's becauce you say "Prose" and I don't see this poem as Prose.

Thank you 

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Written by Msjewel  (1/27/2012 7:08:53 PM)

Thank you for your very kind comments :) Julie


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Written by Msjewel  (1/27/2012 7:38:09 PM)

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