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Beauty Touching Beauty
By Msjewel on 01/27/2012
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Written by sailboat  (1/27/2012 8:52:32 PM)

This is lovely The clarity of metaphor here is top notch. I'm glad to see you here Julie, I love your woirk.

Sorry, I konw you hate this, but I have to be honest. I would like this even better without the last stanza

"beauty touching beauty
I look in her eyes..."

This would be the perfect ending for this poem.

IMHO

:)



 


Written by stephiewoods  (1/27/2012 10:09:16 PM)

beautiful

Thank you 

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Written by Msjewel  (1/28/2012 2:19:30 AM)

Stephanie and Sailboat - Thank you for your lovely comments. Sailboat - I don't hate your critiques - in fact - this one I actually agree with! Thank you. :) Julie

not crtique 

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Written by sailboat  (1/28/2012 1:54:53 PM)

You're welcome Julie, but I don't consider these honest reviews a criit, thoiugh most would agree with you. My crits are much more in-depth and could run upto a page long. Anyway I really do admire your skill.

:)

nice 


Written by Unknown Member  (1/28/2012 3:51:15 PM)

nice i like the picture and the title :)


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