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Why write about love?
By Cervantes on 01/30/2012
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Reviews: 4


Written by Starr  (1/31/2012 2:37:20 AM)

I feel the pain that radiates from your words. Well versed. Unfortunate that you had to go through that. But you do not need to break yourself over her any longer.


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/1/2012 11:58:51 AM)

but it all passed like a warm zephyr

without losing anymore fragments
of me
-absolutely love these two quotes in your poem.

The raw voice is quite passive yet you can extrapolate perhaps anger, disillusionment, or maybe a bit of left over grief.

As per the title, I see how its perfect for this piece.

I just simply love your writing.

BTW are you coming to play on challenge 2?


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Written by summerlove1915  (2/1/2012 3:35:00 PM)

wonderfully written.


Written by OliviaStrange  (2/1/2012 7:25:02 PM)

Cervantes, you know how much i have always loved your poems, and you should also be aware how honust i am, sometimes even harsh. This poem is so perfectly placed I would expect to only see it in the hands of the true Cervantes. I am not sure if you did it on purpous but lines

"you did listen to me
before you went deaf
and your heart stopped hearing
any word I spoke"

Made me think a happy ending was instore. Possibly a change of heart from "her". As a bitter soul i am, i hate happy endings. However, when you continued and it was clear no happy ending was in order(sorry for you) i was overwhelmed with a amazed sensation.

So for now and forever i am still amazed by your work. Looking forward for more.

(note there are some spelling errors, but eh, we are all human)

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