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An Exception
By Cervantes on 02/07/2012
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Written by Starr  (2/8/2012 12:01:01 AM)

the last 5 stanzas are amazing.

 


Written by I_bleed_fire  (2/8/2012 12:42:32 AM)

Awesome, it's very in depth

loved this 


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/12/2012 10:42:38 AM)

You know what I enjoyed most out of this piece? -The voice has a tone of vulnerability that reaches me deeply.

And this quote:

The watchmen will tend the dogs
You are stronger than fragile
but still delicate and alone

-that quote melted me.

Yet the end (in my perception) was strong but perhaps I wanted more as a reader. I hope you don't mind my opinion. You know I deeply love your work. Still it deserves five stars.

 

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Written by Cervantes  (2/13/2012 4:38:59 PM)

Red Roses all opinions are welcome and I do want to leave the reader with a little desire. That way they read the next poem since most are of similar subject anyway. I try to be fresh with my work which is hard when dealing with overdone subjects so thank you for your words and reviews. They make me feel as if I am on the right track. Your reviews as well as everyone's help me gain perspective as to what my readers are experiencing with my work so Thank you again.


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