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sand in my hand's
By flanders on 04/07/2012
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Written by I_bleed_fire  (4/8/2012 2:06:53 AM)

It's decent, and short. Just have to watch out for certain words that spell check won't pick up if you're using it. Second line, I assume should be, "them" and not "then" and "walked" should be "walk"? If I"m wrong, I apologize.

 

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Written by flanders  (4/8/2012 5:10:11 AM)

no its then walked the sands alone
but thanks for looking.


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