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Death's Transfiguration (final revision)
By JdSchooley on 06/26/2012
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Written by dersoninperson  (6/29/2012 4:06:30 PM)

So, the picture completely freaked me out-- but I've looked past that (literally and figuratively). I loved your language and sense of weight that is carried throughout the poem-- however, I feel like the resolution to the poem is a little too stark in contrast to the rest of the piece. The final stanza, to me, seems to come up from nowhere and thus less believable.

That aside, it was a good read.

 


Written by indigo  (8/2/2012 5:18:42 AM)

An interesting juxtaposition. Your heady wording, and freaky picture create a wonderful friction. Talent, and joy in manipulating words...is hard to come by. Very cool!

indigo 

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Written by JdSchooley  (8/11/2012 12:32:17 PM)

Good to hear your thoughts, possibly you will enjoy" the Book of Secret Desires as well".......Jd


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