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Angel in the Rain
By BlownAway on 06/28/2012
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Written by dersoninperson  (6/29/2012 3:59:14 PM)

I was really hoping that the first four lines would be the style for the rest of the poem, so I was a little disappointed. Personally, I think it would sound better if you stuck with a consistent meter, because for the most part, the words are solid and don't need to be adjusted.

Angel in the rain 


Written by BlownAway  (6/30/2012 2:06:12 AM)

Thank you for the constructive criticism, as this is my only way to both teach and learn, sometimes my free writing becomes spontaneous. It may have something to do with the way words come into my head. 1 <3. Peace through beauty and creation.


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